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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2016-01-02 12:02 PM


beyond the dark of night
deep within a brilliant
shimmering dawn
sunlight glows through
translucent silvery wings

you, here with me now
...and I with you my darling one

you my angel
...illuminating the darkest of days

you my love
...bringing happiness we both can share

I love you as much as you can know.

© Copyright 2016 Danny - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2016-01-02 07:05 AM


How wonderfully romantic and sweet! I'll bet she loved it. Tickle on my friend! ~L
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-01-02 09:25 AM


To love a woman as you love your wife is something not many of us can know. I envy you in a way, but even more than that I am proud of what you have with your wife.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2016-01-02 10:40 AM


Beautiful, heart warming sentiment.  A pleasure to read.  Hope you experience it just like this all through the new year.  

Michael

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-01-05 07:51 PM


beautiful...james
ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2016-01-07 04:33 AM


"“Lovers find secret places
inside this violent world
where they make transactions
with beauty.”
¯ Rumi

I would call this poem a "transaction, with beauty"

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2016-01-07 04:42 AM


fine 'slice of life' romanticism !
rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA
7 posted 2016-01-07 03:38 PM


Tf, This could be a heartfelt Love-song,
may you never stop singing it to her.

Nicely done..
rainy

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