My Woman, My Wife, My Angel...

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Open Poetry #49

My Woman, My Wife, My Angel...

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2016-01-02 12:02 PM

beyond the dark of night
deep within a brilliant
shimmering dawn
sunlight glows through
translucent silvery wings

you, here with me now
...and I with you my darling one

you my angel
...illuminating the darkest of days

you my love
...bringing happiness we both can share

I love you as much as you can know.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2016-01-02 07:05 AM

How wonderfully romantic and sweet! I'll bet she loved it. Tickle on my friend! ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-01-02 09:25 AM

To love a woman as you love your wife is something not many of us can know. I envy you in a way, but even more than that I am proud of what you have with your wife.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2016-01-02 10:40 AM

Beautiful, heart warming sentiment. A pleasure to read. Hope you experience it just like this all through the new year.

Michael

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2016-01-05 07:51 PM

beautiful...james

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2016-01-07 04:33 AM

"“Lovers find secret places
inside this violent world
where they make transactions
with beauty.”
¯ Rumi

I would call this poem a "transaction, with beauty"

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2016-01-07 04:42 AM

fine 'slice of life' romanticism !

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA

7 posted 2016-01-07 03:38 PM

Tf, This could be a heartfelt Love-song,
may you never stop singing it to her.

Nicely done..
rainy

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