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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-28 07:00 AM





A strange pregnancy carried
in the womb of a dying year
The infant with eyes yet open
Lays in a cold cradle dressed with tired tinsel
and left over pine needles

In Trafalgar Square Nelson looks down
on fake pipers in counterfeit kilts
Playing the first verse of an old drinking song
While strangers join hands with strangers
And try to smile

We wait for a golden dawn
To break on our New Jerusalem
Will our song carry promise?
On the fractured crutch of hope.
Or founder on the rocks of honeyed lies.

Have a good one folks.


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-12-28 07:09 AM


Pretty heavy stuff there! You say it well the things that need saying. Way to go! ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-28 09:10 AM


Every line is a perfect line as I see it, Cari. You gave the reader (moi) much to contemplate for sure, and contemplate I surely did. I just love those lines of mystery and sometimes indecision. I'm saving this one,

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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