Open Poetry #49 |
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New Year. |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
A strange pregnancy carried in the womb of a dying year The infant with eyes yet open Lays in a cold cradle dressed with tired tinsel and left over pine needles In Trafalgar Square Nelson looks down on fake pipers in counterfeit kilts Playing the first verse of an old drinking song While strangers join hands with strangers And try to smile We wait for a golden dawn To break on our New Jerusalem Will our song carry promise? On the fractured crutch of hope. Or founder on the rocks of honeyed lies. Have a good one folks. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pretty heavy stuff there! You say it well the things that need saying. Way to go! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Every line is a perfect line as I see it, Cari. You gave the reader (moi) much to contemplate for sure, and contemplate I surely did. I just love those lines of mystery and sometimes indecision. I'm saving this one, ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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