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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-23 10:44 AM





She reads the Christmas cards again
Oh dear, only four this year
Still the young ones have so much to do
Hope they like the little presents
I wish that I could have afforded more
~
Nearly time for church
She opens the old leather purse
Carefully counting the coins
For the collection plate
Puts on her hat and coat
~
She picks up the photo frame
Fingers the face behind the glass
and smiles through the tears
Now you are gone my love
Why am I still here?


Author's Notes:
Christmas is not a joyful occasion for everyone.


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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
1 posted 2015-12-23 03:45 PM


No, its not always joyful.

Memories of Christmases enjoyed with loved ones' now gone are painful to endure, especially if one now finds themselves alone without a supportive and caring family.

Reach out if you know someone or even see someone who is alone and let your humanity shine as bright as a Christmas star.


88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA
2 posted 2015-12-23 04:58 PM


Very heart-touching, a lovely piece Poet.

And yes..many of us have experienced the other side of the holidays to one degree or another.

rainy

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line
3 posted 2015-12-23 07:58 PM


"Reach out if you know someone or even see someone who is alone and let your humanity shine as bright as a Christmas star".

A good reply that must upstage a good piece of poetry. Bravo Mr. Fingers and to you Cari.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2015-12-23 09:50 PM


Ahhh . . . True, so very true, Cari . . . I've had my share of sad Christmases through the years . . . Not so great!

~ Do what you have to do to feel right,
I'll do my best to be alright. ~

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