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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-22 12:44 PM


Softly, my sweet one
Moonlight flows like honey
Over your body so blue

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-12-22 05:50 AM


Of that sweet one they said
On that unfortunate moonlit night
She was in way over her head
~L


You are to the macabre what Mother Goose is to Nursery Rhymes.

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (12-22-2015 06:22 AM).]

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2015-12-22 08:57 AM


I was reminded of the beautiful blue bodies of the movie "Avatar" and so the eventually disquieting part could not be perceived.

moonlight flows like honey

Beautiful!

Margherita

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