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Open Poetry #49

Mystique

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-21 06:18 PM

Frenetic paces
Twisted faces
Anyone and everyone

A difference
Between them and you
That only you can know

Whisper it to me
When the sun falls
Between our toes.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-12-21 09:48 PM

Dear Capo,
I loves this! My favorite is the visual on the toes...reminds me of the commercial with the two people in bathtubs on the beach. ~L

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

2 posted 2015-12-21 10:14 PM

I favor whispers just before bath time mon cher.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2015-12-22 08:21 AM

Those frenetic paces bring anxiety and there is not enough time to BE.

Whispers instead at dusk allow us to remember who we really are and find bliss in the discovery.

Oh and the sun between the toes gives this a beautiful sensual touch.

Margherita

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