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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-20 11:41 AM




Father McCauley licked his lips
And after a few perfunctory sips
Decided it was quite in order to dine
On a stolen bottle of communion wine
~
Now his nether regions are all ablaze
In his bowels a raging storm
For the Lord moves in mysterious ways
His vengeance to perform

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2015-12-20 12:34 PM


Tragicomical! Temptation can hit hard. But in this case I would rather see the Lord smile than acting out of vengeance.

You write well, Cari.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-20 01:36 PM


Hah! Ain't dat da truff, Cari, payback is . . . er . . . hekk!

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
3 posted 2015-12-20 07:45 PM


wine is fine but grass is greener.

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2015-12-20 08:21 PM


action, and reaction...hope the old padre learened his lesson

fun stuff Cari

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

Pete_W
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Scotland (UK)
5 posted 2015-12-20 10:45 PM


Repentance might get a load off his... errr... mind, yes that was it, mind. Very good and funny thanks for the read and the smiles.
Pete

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2015-12-20 11:15 PM


LOL!! Loved this...

j.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2015-12-21 09:16 PM


these things happen sometimes...james
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