Open Poetry #49 |
Noah and the fish |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Noah and the fish A fisher man waits Lines carefully caste out As dawn breaks the night The bobbin dips Ripples cascade from the line Now the fight begins One never knows what the day brings -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (12-17-2015 01:42 AM).] |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Beauty in your image and optimistic expectation blended metaphorically in your poetry. I need to think about what I just said, taking care to avoid any hooks twirling about my head and shoulders. 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Juju, and a fight to the death is everything works out alright. ~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice poetry, the last line, profound, and it speaks to the best part of life... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading this...james |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts" Silent all these Years, Tori Amos Your poem is delightful Juju, though I know your efforts and they all are fine offerings. The term 'deep thoughts' must appeal to you as I see you like Tori Amos's quote on your signature. Like many things given to the beholder, "deep" is a relative perception to me because I've never had anyone explain its meaning to me in terms of thought. I recall heads using the term, but they were too stoned at the time to explain it. Its like Plato's plight. You just sit there and stare at it until you go over the deep end. Deep end...? Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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