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Ticklefingers
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Louisiana

0 posted 2015-12-15 04:54 PM


I like this park.
let's find a bench
and sit for a while.

I've some kernels
the pigeons will love
they can dance for us as we talk

                     ...and how those pigeons spark!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-12-15 05:29 PM


Methinks it isn't altogether the pigeons who got the spark on, Ticklefingers. I have always loved to take a girl to a nearby park to sit and talk. Somehow intimacy and the park coexists together . . .

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
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2 posted 2015-12-15 05:59 PM


TF,
It's true! they do! I love to watch them, especially when they are all different colors. ~L

Pete_W
Member
Posts 185
Scotland (UK)
3 posted 2015-12-15 07:57 PM


Interview with a voyeur pigeon
Thanks for the read
Pete

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2015-12-15 08:12 PM


Great visual.  Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2015-12-16 04:27 AM


Oh yes they do, while they are in your sphere of influence ... love affects and transforms whatever and whoever moves within the magical atmosphere. A bench in a park, a treasure of stories to be told.

Very nice, Danny.

Margherita

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