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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-01-07 08:22 AM

nighttime when the sky envelops him
the brightest star
sends down its acceptance
of his presence
he has a feeling akin
to the first merry-go-round he rode
he stands quiet
feeling the rush complete
before he speaks
do you still love me?
are you still mine?
am I forgiven?
do you feel my heartbreaking grief?
the sky, with its blinking stars
the brightest star
send shimmering vibes into his heart
and says no

©December 1, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-07-2014 10:14 PM).]

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2014-01-07 10:09 PM

"No"
It's cruel (((

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-01-07 10:15 PM

I agree Gale. Good to see you here tonight. Thank you.

~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

3 posted 2014-01-08 01:52 PM

I'm glad to see you too

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

4 posted 2014-01-09 08:36 PM

O so sad
I could feel your heart sinking through this to the ending thud

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2014-01-09 08:42 PM

Hi Emma. I keep replaying certain times in my life. The only difference is that these days I do it for poetic expression and not for using my heart as a sounding board. Thank you for showing up, my friend.

~*~ Among my most prized possessions are the words that I have never spoken. ~*~

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

6 posted 2014-01-10 09:09 PM

Serious questions answered simply... and with pain...

This drew me in and kept me..
a very good write

Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2014-01-10 09:12 PM

Good to see you here, Ringo, and thank you for reading and commenting on my poem Ah, misdirected love can bring us down that is for sure.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

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