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Open Poetry #49

Forewarned

Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-11-30 06:20 PM

Sensation of flesh
Like the marriage of two souls
In a den of thieves

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-11-30 07:06 PM

Yes, I like this interpretation concerning the fleshy delights we find ourselves in. Perfect, actually.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2015-11-30 07:35 PM

I can see that point of view...Call me old fashioned, I thought that in matters of the flesh ones gives as good as they take

Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

3 posted 2015-12-01 03:38 AM

Thank you Mr. Bolton. Your view is a valuable one.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line

4 posted 2015-12-01 04:05 AM

To be called "Old Fashioned" may not be as entertaining as sipping on one Lori Rhoden.

Regarding "give and take", that for me involves a sense of balance. To give, without measure, is an action demonstrative of love. If we give to one another, acceptance is all encompassing and there is nothing to take. We take nothing from the sun, we accept all that it gives. For myself, this is what love means. The "Den of Thieves" be damned.

Merci beaucoup mon amie

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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