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Cinnamon Hands |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA 
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Cinnamon Hands~ Rolled out.. soft dough, fingers warm manipulated, turned and sprinkled with spice, Cinnamon..again and again, brown sugar heaped, handled with care, then hot from the oven spilling butter to salivating tongue. Your tasty confection, decadent pastry, created from the master Baker, not the Butcher, or the Candlestick maker. The Man with Cinnamon hands, who makes sweet love on the pantry floor. ©Jan~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another (delectable) 'write' most fine! |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
From pin to tongue, this poem of yours is daintily prepared rainyday. Fresh baked from an oven comes the tastiest morsels indeed, though the ending may lead one such as myself, to the most provocative of interpretations. Cinnamon = Sin-a-mon = Sinner-man = Mr Martini Coffee, black s'il vous plaît. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Warm cinnamon rolls on a cold day are close to heaven. And this little poem is sweet praise for the blessed hands that create that bit of heaven on earth. Loved it!~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . and that says it all . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-29-2015 11:41 AM).] |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Thank you shdreampoet for the 'delectable' response. Mr. M, Yes,that's the right interpretation lol and I agree..blk. coffee it is. Thank you |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Thank you L. my fav too, though this was an oldie. lol, it sure does JP, Thanks.. |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
The scent of this really comes through from your words and the last stanza is a great ending. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks Pete |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want a cinnamon cookie now...james |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Pete, Thank you, know what you mean.. (scent) tends to make one hungry. Pleased you liked the twist ending. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Oh...poor guy, need to know someone who can bake..or make a stop at your local bakery.  Thanks.. |
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