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Open Poetry #49

Riding White Horses

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2015-11-27 08:30 PM

Riding White Horses

"Ask me how it feels to ride a white horse; a white
horse is to ride, to enjoy, to feel alive..."

Did you ever
know one of those girls
that you thought about
almost all the time,
wanting her, letting her,
consume your mind:
so one day over coffee
you told her about
the depth of your feelings;
something like,
Honey I'm only
living for your kiss,
in the morning as I awaken,
all through the day,
even late at night,
I can imagine
the smile on your lips
and I find myself
wanting another kiss;
and you know what
she said to me,
"That's why I'm here."

JamesLee
11/27/15

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA

1 posted 2015-11-28 09:38 PM

JM, Love is grand! liked this happy ending.
Liked that Title also.

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

2 posted 2015-11-29 01:51 AM

Sometimes, moments such as this really happen, and when they do...

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Pete_W
Member
Posts 185
Scotland (UK)

3 posted 2015-11-30 11:28 AM

Enjoyed the way your last line leaves so many different endings open.
Thanks
Pete

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2015-11-30 07:22 PM

Thank you rainyday, Mr. Martini and Pete for responding...james

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