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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2015-11-24 09:48 PM


lost
in a maze of
love
forever looking for
imperfection to an otherwise
perfect heart
which had been given
to him
did he treat this given heart
with respect
it was due
yes, of course he did
except for the one thing
which had been instrumental
in her pulling the whole of
her heart back
leaving him holding
what little she had left him
memories


~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-11-25 08:08 AM


Tender bittersweet reminiscing here my friend. ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-11-25 08:10 AM


Thank you for understanding, Lori. Hoping  you will have a good day.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2015-11-25 02:01 PM


Much in this piece - heart, soul . . . and a whole lot of misery too.

Wonderful write ...


j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2015-11-25 02:22 PM


Thanks, Jimmy, yep, all of the above. Thank you.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
5 posted 2015-11-25 02:23 PM


Without these feelings, how can one know joy?

You cover a lot of ground in your poetry JerryPat. And perhaps it was all that ground which passed beneath your feet that is so intricately related in your work.


88's friend for a cheerful holiday (pass that along to Zoe!)

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2015-11-25 02:25 PM


No doubt Ticklefingers, my life, my wanderings, are front and center within most of my poetic undertaking. Thanks . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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