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Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-11-17 03:37 AM

Lift your veil my dear sweet Luna
Envelope me in your radiant light
Know me in all your ways my lovely
Leave me not this orphaned night

Spill my blood for you dear Luna
Aire sweet flowers of the dead
Scarlet spirits writhe in rhythms
Painting patterns upon the bed

Reach then in my heart sweet Luna
Find the words for you are true
I knew you in my way dear Luna
Now know my dying love for you

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-11-17 06:18 AM

Oh creep on Mr. Martini! There is something akin to a car wreck that won't let a person look away from your words even though they know something repulsive lurks and lingers. You have a gift, or are you cursed? Fine writing either way. My first encounter with a bloody muse. ~L

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2015-11-17 09:37 AM

the words of your bloody muse must inhabit the wind, and whiffs of them can be intoxicating...I can't unfollow you, drawn am I like a fridge magnet

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

3 posted 2015-11-17 12:05 PM

If your poetry is in dedication to the 'bloody supermoon' Mr. Martini, fear not, for you will have another opportunity in 2033.

I myself, may have expired by then in spite of my optimism to the contrary.

Splendid read Mr. Martini!

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

4 posted 2015-11-17 05:54 PM

I actually found this poem almost easygoing. I love your poems and always remember to brace for your sinister ways, (I say this with the sweetest of smiles, sir).

Another good one!
Constance

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

5 posted 2015-11-17 07:11 PM

You please me in every word of reply, each and every one of you, now and perhaps those to come.

I shall,as you say Lori Rhoden, "creep on'. You are attractively bold, I'm certain. Madam jjote, I shall think of you each time I approach my "fridge". Imagine how you might stick to my extraordinarily large freezer. Ticklefingers, I shall say to you that any way you see it, I will see it as a compliment. Constance my dear, you must have the most appetizing smile love, and you grace my words with your presence.

Au Revoir

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2015-11-17 10:52 PM

very nice...james

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