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Hitchhiking the Universe
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Hitchhiking the Universe |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I ventured outward that day I was so cranked up found myself wandering haphazardly around the cosmos contentedly I did roam absorbing secrets of the ageless Milky Way and the exploding supernovas where conceptual reality expanded my mind even a soul I never knew I’d possessed this mind trip gave me astonishment on an intellectual basis I was not seeking anything spiritual in my hitchhiking of this, the full blown universe why then did I feel a hand on my shoulder ©November 11, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A hand upon your shoulder to steady you on your journey. JO |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right, Jo . . . Even though it was just a poem somehow I felt that hand . . . Thank you . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid, a look that embraces a part of future i guess, have a nice day yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Yann, for your read and comments. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is really nice...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Huh? A hand on your shoulder. I think it's the Creator of this wonderful universe reminding or showing you again the marvels around and above you |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Enjoyed this celestial journey.  rainyday J |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . There are many possibilities concerning that guiding hand, jjote. Thank you for your thoughts on it. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Rainyday, many thanks for your sweet words. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, this was a great journey, Jerry! You must have felt the Oneness with All There is ... We are part of this Universe, this can't be denied, all the related mysteries will be unveiled probably on another level of existence. I enjoyed this much. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I must admit that there was something within me as I wrote the poem that I could not describe. Maybe you hit on it with "the Oneness with All There is." I sorta feel comfortable. Thank you Margarita . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
The bigger our experience becomes, the smaller we feel sometimes. This is when we need to know we aren't alone. Very nicely done. Smiles, Constance |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Though basically I have pretty much been a loner kind of guy throughout my life, Constance, I always relied on people, alive and not alive to help me through my many struggles. Thank you very much for joining that group today. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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