JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-16
08:59 AM
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cruel energy on the savage streets twisting and jabbing into your spine no place to hunker down all concrete splattered with rain making sure you know you are nothing standing under the eve of Lucky's Pawnshop hugging yourself trying to feel warmth tears mingle with the rain has it ever been worse than this jam hands in pockets loose change enough maybe for an entrance into the all-night diner across the street cup of hot java oh yes, coffee will hit the spot clutching the three quarters, two dimes and four pennies you streak across the street fling the door to the diner open step inside my oh my, warmth short order cook gives you the eye nobody else does they're in the same shape as you are down-and-outers sit at the counter shivering from the cold and warmth combined coffee you tell the man sitting at the cash register short order cook hears you sets a steaming cup in front of you wrap your hands around it warming them as you do you look around skinny girl at the end of the counter looks at you drops her gaze a frightened doe surrounded by a room full of hunters she looks so alone, so unapproachable still you take your cup and approach put the coffee cup in front of her she has nothing except a glass of water she raises her eyes they say thank you she takes a sip pushes it toward you you drank by the time that cup of coffee is empty your hands have found each other your hands tell each other nobody need be alone that night you pay for the coffee and leave back into the drizzling, cold rain she has a place nearby there you hold her face in your hands acknowledging the kindness in her eyes you cling to each other fully clothed on the bed pull the cover over both of you and, still fully clothed lay there giving each other all you have to give warmth and whatever comes from it
~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
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2014-02-16
11:18 AM
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Been there many times. It's my old neighborhood where you could pick up a meal if you could tickle anything out of tune, no matter what her name was....just bein' Bluesy
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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
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2014-02-16
11:37 AM
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charming and gritty, just real good all around
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-16
11:43 AM
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Thank you Emma. I meant the poem as a way to show that humans crave and need other humans warmth whether it comes from each other bodies or from the warmth of their hearts. I sure didn't mean it to suggest that the man in this poem (me) was just trying to get a meal out of the woman. She didn't even have money for cup of coffee.
~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~
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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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2014-02-16
12:03 PM
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really enjoyed this one Jerry.. loved the message
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2014-02-16
12:20 PM
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This one radiates all the warmth you intended and then some. Very discrptive. I could almost smell the wet bodies and coffee.
Lori
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-16
12:23 PM
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Thank you Lori.~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~
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latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
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2014-02-16
12:46 PM
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Enjoyed the poem and your understanding of desperate needs. jo
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-16
12:48 PM
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Thank you Jo, your comments are always welcome and always make me smile.~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~
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