My Undeniable (a repost for my Valentine)

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Open Poetry #49

My Undeniable (a repost for my Valentine)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-02-14 05:55 AM

I slipped into suggestive
but wore it like a demand
It's deliberate was plunging
and the cling was sheer
A scent unrelenting
as desire's dew
My undeniable
wants you
LGR(C)8/1/13

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (02-14-2014 09:26 AM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-02-14 06:43 AM

Your valentine will find it all most provocative and that is undeniable.

Make the most of it.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-02-14 07:44 AM

Nice poetry, Lori.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2014-02-15 06:55 AM

loved the first two lines, they were magic..

hope you had a wonderful Valentines Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2014-02-16 07:16 AM

Thanks guys! Thanks for commenting on this provocative little piece. Glad you enjoyed this piece of lace I pulled out of the drawer for the special occasion.

Lori

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