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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2015-11-06 09:18 AM



Love is found past the grave,
an unknown wholesome fact.
Oh no! I’ll not behave,
Second life I’ll attack!

©November 5, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2015 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2015-11-06 10:14 AM


Well you know what they say about your other lives don't you... that the people you were close to in this life will be close to you in the next. Only next time a lover may be your mother and your mother a brother etc.
Karma is a curious thing.  ~L

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-11-06 10:16 AM


I learned something today. Thanks for the info . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Redstart
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3 posted 2015-11-07 01:27 PM


If I get a second chance: I'll take stock and .....still attack!
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-11-07 01:31 PM


Heh.Heh I hear you Redstart, I hear you loud  and clear.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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5 posted 2015-11-08 12:21 PM


This is a great intention, dear Jerry! I often think that when we pray "Rest in peace" it sounds like a rather boring destiny ... we just will recharge and get ready again for ... new adventures.

Margherita

2islander2
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6 posted 2015-11-08 12:27 PM


if there is somthing after , don't know but the poem authorize dreams and the will that exist this second life, nicely done for sure


yann


JerryPat2
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7 posted 2015-11-08 12:39 PM


Thank you, yann.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2015-11-08 12:42 PM


Yeah, you're right, Margherita! Reload and venture forth into the  unknown. I think adoringly at that concept.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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9 posted 2015-11-08 06:05 PM


Really Cute!!

j.

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2015-11-08 06:09 PM


Thanks Jimmy!

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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