Open Poetry #49 |
Truth of Consequences |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Truth of Consequences "Sometimes even when you make what you consider right choices you feel the pain." "One summer day, exercising her choice, my first love moved away; that's the day you find out, it hurts when your first love goes away." Like a young fool on a summer day my first love moved away; we took a drive to a remote desert valley to say our last goodbyes, There I ask her why would she move away and make me cry; she knew how much I cared for her, I always treated her nice, we had shared many special times and she reminded me of the night when she told me she was graduating from high school soon and if I wouldn't make her my wife she would have to move on with her life, soon after that conversation she moved, and I remember laying on my bed, crying until my face turned red. JamesLee 10/12/15 Billie Jean where are you? Thanks for being a special part of my life... |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Don't look for her James, because you might find her. 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm not really looking but she's a pleasant memory...each person only has their own life in memory...good or bad...james |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
the problem is the 'sticking point' ... when one has nothing left but memories of lost loves. fine 'slice of life' and 'memories' write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you secondhanddreampoet for the nice response...james |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear James, those tears we shed in our young years, when the world seemed to crash because of a love that wasn't meant to continue ... You remember this story beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
like we say in french : "plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un instant, chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie," thanks James for the moving words yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Margherita and 2islander2 for the nice response...James |
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