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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2015-10-03 03:22 PM


That gypsy blood pulses so
within the frame of all it knows
pushing, pushing, this way/that
looking for an exit point.

No door, no hole, no crevice, crack,
but still the search goes on and on
like one determined not to stay
forever in the dark.

Where is the light, where is the light,
and, yes, it listens ardently
but who can speak to gypsy blood
when confined so deep, deep, down?

The will to pulse grows weaker every day
so when you go on walk-abouts
spare a thought and prayer or two
that gypsy blood will find the door.

But time, that artful thing called time
may not come to the party
and that poor old gypsy blood
will simply cease to be.

Rest in Peace!

Helen / 3 October 2015


© Copyright 2015 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2015-10-03 03:43 PM


"like one determined not to stay
forever in the dark."

Your gypsy blood will just not allow you peace it seems. Forever giving you cause to resist and you give us a summary of what is taking place within you.

As you so eloquently wrote, someday it will escape from the dark.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2015-10-04 04:03 AM


Thanks, Jerry.  Yes, at that elusive "some time" all things are possible.
Michael
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3 posted 2015-10-04 12:09 PM


The restless spirit is vivid in this piece.  And time, while it sometimes may seem the enemy, in the end brings us all to the same place.

Michael

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2015-10-04 12:21 PM


Yes, indeed it does, Michael.  Thanks for reading.
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