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Untried Gods
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Untried Gods |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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once, a long time ago, I watched my first Rose strip away her petals until she was unprotected only for me it all happened in time-lapse surroundings all these years since I've solicited my untried gods that another Rose might come to bud my untried gods are smiling ©June 23, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
patience man, she may just be around the corner waiting... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When I said, in the last line of the poem, "my untried gods are smiling," I meant that she had come to me. Thank you, jjote. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
OOPS..missed that..good for you. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I like your word play here, my friend. I like your subtle implications. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good day Lori, and thank you muchly . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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