Open Poetry #49 |
The Giggle |
Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
The Giggle In the misty, murky mire of a mangled, marshy mud rose a Moon betwixt the shadows ‘neath a starry night above. No bird beat wings. No mouse did squeak. Not even an owl’s hoot did pierce the stillness clinging to the trees and plants and roots. I stomped upon the cigarette. The embers fumed and fizzled. As I turned to go back inside, I swore I heard a giggle; not large but small, not big but tiny, not huge but very wee behind the house, down by the marsh’s solitary tree. I stepped on leaves. I sloshed thru grass. I parted a bush with fear and beheld a sight, not often seen, uncommonly vivid and rare. A tiny stadium filled with bugs, some odd, some known by name were giggling, cheering in tiny voices at an insect Baseball game! Miniature floodlights lit the diamond. A roach hit a highball fly. A beetle with cap and glove caught it. The audience roared and sighed. I couldn’t believe it! My mind was blown! Legs and feet went limp as mosquito vendors shouted “Get your hotdogs, burgers and shrimp!” Mesmerized, my face went slack. The muscles cramped my jaw. Only a spectacle like this comes once to remember forevermore. I moved and something snapped or cracked, a limb, a twig, a branch. All bugs did turn their eyes on me. Their glare….an avalanche! They scattered in an instant, even turned off all the lights and plunged the field in darkness making shadows of the night. The beating wings, the mouse’s squeak, the owl’s nightly hoot now pierced the calm to chase the bugs in hungry, hot pursuit. And the tiny voices faded ‘neath a starry night above in the misty, murky mire of a mangled marshy mud. Namyh [This message has been edited by Namyh (08-19-2015 09:47 AM).] |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
beautiful imagery. I am mesmerized |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I loved this night-life poem. As a night lover I could almost hear the sounds of the creatures who also come to life at dusk.And the giggle was certain to be from a tiny elf like creature that lives in the minds of night lovers. Best to you , Ko |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
and the game goes on...james |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
jjote - No created work is better honored than when it mesmerizes the reader, a kindred poet. Thanks jjote. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
latearrival - "a tiny elf like creature that lives in the mind of nightlovers". Wow! So you know Benny too! He gave me a little of his magic and it put a giggle in me. This baseball creation was the result. Hope it put a smile on ya. Batter up! Namyh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Namyh, what a delightful poem you have created! I am in awe by the beauty of your fantasy! Next time take me with you when you go on discovery in a silent night! Love, Margherita |
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