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Crystalline Yellow Moon
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Crystalline Yellow Moon |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 ahhh . . . darkness surrounded The Hovel except for a sliver of the bright moon seeping through the window though only a sliver the moon encased The Hovel into moonlight yellow sorta a crystalline yellow caused me to think of lovers ‘neath that beautiful moon and its breathtaking wonderment I could have gotten up fixed the blind on the window shut the moon out but no I lay there soaking up the texture of the crystalline yellow moon giving me such wondrous contentment fell asleep smiling I am sure ©July 8, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
and you did go to write that moon poem. Beautiful photo too, but how did it get to be yellow? A painter's dream? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You've never seen a yellow moon, jjote? I have. I don't have the slightest idea if an artist painted this moon, it just appealed to me. Sorry, you seem to believe it is fake. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I find many colors in the moon's view depending on the surroundings and the eye Very warm wonderful poem |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
I am sure I would not shut the blind on a moon like that...have not seen one quite like that, but close. Nice inspiration, Jerry. CG |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks a lot, CG. I have seen Harvest moons as impressive as the one pictured. Appreciate your thoughts . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Emma, for always supporting me. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks . . . Jerry ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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