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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
To write from deep within The words True 'self' reveal Thus - Symbiotic - Equal Strength and Weakness Exposed Laid bare On a mirror Turned within... CG |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . darkness usually occurs when those two get together, at least that has been my take on the subject. Then again dark can be good if you can control it, but hell, who wants to control it . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
So true -writing from within is laying bare your soul, exposing your inmost self, takes strength and courage..like turning a mirror to what you are within. Am I right on my take of your poem, which by the way is very deep. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Jerry - there is something to that, though I would add that the particular 'blending' of the two, the mix, is what makes us unique - but how we handle and express those qualities to the external world is what defines us, at least perceptively. James - thank you for stopping by. jjote - thank you for reading and commenting. And - yes, you hit the nail on the head. Exactly as intended. CG |
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