Open Poetry #49 |
ABC poem - Anticipation |
jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
[feeling uninspired, have to resort to an ABC poem] A nticipation ruins the fun of surprises B etter to wait for destiny to run its course C ast your eyes on the platter of life's flavors before you D ecide to taste and savor first, not feast ravenously. E xhilaration comes when you spread your wings F ly free like an eagle, soar into the blue yonder G rab a fistful of clouds into your dreams H appy thoughts too, to replace drab moments. I n a world where mixed emotions can tint the rainbow's colors J oys become diluted by unfulfilled promises K illing you softly, relentless and intimidating L ight and shadow a fantasy play under a grey sky. @jjote |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh yes, the ABC poem is a good way to work your way of of the uninspired feelings that come to us every so often. This one is a good one, and I especially liked that you ended it in a dark sort of way, because life is never always beautiful and filled with light. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
enjoyed your thoughts, jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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