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A New Challenge to you and me
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A New Challenge to you and me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Options for this story Isn't this the stuff from which poems are made?http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap021122.html Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Here's my stab: Leonid Slips by Moon Whispers upon the water Somewhere within a dream Mists in silence hover Just beyond the stream Beneath the shrubbery branches The silence softly broken A tiny family listens At trickles gently spoken Wavelets commence rippling While lapping at the shore Their origin seems a secret As darkness shrouds the moor. ©Virginia Salter February 12, 2014 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
A very good interpretation of Suddeth's image. Smooth, easy reading. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Bluesy I hadn't even noticed that the word haiku was in the explanation of the photo; here's another attempt though I can't decide if it's an haiku or a senyru glimmer brightens faith mist grips enigma hard, fast emotions stir hope ©Virginia Salter February 12, 2014 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful my friend! Your words and the picture make a whole! Enjoyed . . . j. here's my meager attempt at following you . . . /pip/Forum114/HTML/000231.html |
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