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the tender sea of grass
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the tender sea of grass |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
It was under the rise of a tender sea of grass that came their way that day How she picked up a small rose from the ground and lifted it with her fingers Placing it behind her right ear As he followed her, closely, without hesitation Lavender dress, thin laced straps, diagonal of one another behind her back Diamond laced necklace placed around her neck With skin that touched the cream tone sky that watched over her as she began to waltz, glide And he continued to follow her In awe of her every move, of how she began to raise her hands as she motioned over to him To stand by her side. Without hesitation he quickly stood next to her As he slowly began to look at the right side of her cheek As if the rose that still stood behind her ear could somehow speak Could somehow feel every part of those patient cheeks that never wavered Even as the wind began to thrust with more force. He simply couldn’t take his eyes off of her Those eyelashes; long and thick As his hands began to fixate on how her hips could move with such a slender touch That he pressed against them, placing his hands slowly up to her cheeks Falling over himself as he tried to keep up Until they reached the top of the hill Where the valley stood just a few miles ahead As they finally stopped moving each part of their lips Hers plush, his a bit thin Touched, braced one another Placing their hands across each other’s necks As they kissed like the fields did with the sea of grass watching smiling and embracing that moment for the rest of their lives. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I love romantic poems like this where the lady love is mesmerizing to the lover. I think all women secretly wish to have such an impact on their love interest. To know there is someone who sees their ordinary as extraordinary. I enjoyed this! ~L |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Lori I'm happy to see I'm not the only one whose so into romance. Thanks for the kind comments. Tomer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
this is nice...james |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
James Thanks for the kind comments. Hope you're doing well. Cheers Tomer |
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