Open Poetry #49 |
Logs, Fogs and other Flotsam (from Faces of Love) |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Logs, Fogs and other Flotsam (from Faces of Love) Camera in hand – Seventy-five miles south of home on the coast of saltwater depths – white-rimmed waves rushing, gulls, Sanderlings, Plovers and other birds I cannot name, chasing them back to sea, back into the slowly receding morning fog. You're beautiful in the shot I take with the water rushing over your toes, the wind wrapping your hair around your smile, the fog muting the back ground with gray, my love for you more than bountiful today. Sea Shells, a walk on the beach, driftwood, holding hands, touching lips, loving, being alive - Inner-thoughts silently sending a thrill from our hearts, down our arms, through our hands, to the souls at either end . . . and on the wind, to touch, to caress, our skin. Logs, Fogs and other Flotsam, you and me, an idyllic time to be in Love. © wesley james beard, jr. july 13, 2015 [This message has been edited by jwesley (07-13-2015 11:56 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
"with the water rushing over your toes, the wind wrapping your hair around your smile," ~gorgeous capture! Enjoyed the entwined walk on shore of waves truly perfect poetry.. be well, ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully rendered, Jimmy, well done and all that. To have a love such as you described is the very best thing a man can have. Nothing gives us the feel of knowing the woman we love loves us back. Wonderfully penned, man . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jimmy, This is a great poem! A sea shore snap shot at its best! My favorite thing about it is that you could be speaking of a new love. Knowing it is a vintage romance is priceless! ~L |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
really nice...james |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Logs, Fogs and other Flotsam, you and me, an idyllic time to be in Love." Some times the surroundings give a little nudge to romantic feelings and love. enjoyed the this ,Jo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love it, Jimmy. Some really great lines. Ida |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I can just see the images you are painting with your words - early walks on sandy shores, birds flying around - what better time and place to be in love. enjoyed. |
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