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Open Poetry #49

I see you

Angela Hauser
Junior Member
Posts 17

0 posted 2015-07-02 01:30 PM

I see you
I see you and I still love you
I see you and I love you more for it
I see you in your rawest form
I see your flaws
I see your lies
I see the reason behind them
I see you throw me away
I see my gift disregarded
I see you reaching out to others
I see you searching for that same gift
I see you do it again and again
I see your disappointment
I see your pain
I see you as you look at me
Knowing that I love you
Wishing you would see

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2015-07-25 07:32 PM

nice writing...james

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2015-07-28 10:56 AM

"I see you as you look at me
Knowing that I love you
Wishing you would see"

I see your sadness and your pain - and I hope he does too.

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

3 posted 2015-09-18 07:39 PM

That's lovely

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

4 posted 2015-09-20 10:01 PM

With one touch, a blind man could see more in you.

Thoughtful, insightful poetry.

88's to you friend.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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