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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2015-06-27 08:38 PM



Under whispering trees
in dappled shade,
come sit with me
on this fallen log
in the gentle hours.  

And I will read to you
poetry of times long gone
when forests breathed
sweet fragrances
and life was slow.

Feel your worries slip
away to the leaf-soft carpet
unwelcome
as you step into
this wonderworld
of magic tales
and mystery.

Let me paint
your dreams
and wishes
and hopes
and memories
alive
where the sun by day
and the moon by night
embrace you
and let your spirit dance
and sing,
remembering.

And when the poems end
as all must do,
may you arise
and may your workaday
be soft-edged
and bright-hearted
and for that
I will be smile-glad.  

Owl

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-06-27 10:52 PM


Upbeat, beautiful poetry, Owl. You are very adept when you set your thoughts to this kinda poetry you excel in, although your darkness comes in a very close second. As they say, and I know you will, keep writin'. . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2015-06-29 04:59 AM


Wow, thank you Jerry for all those compliments.  Another wow!  Nobody has ever complimented my poems of darkness as a type before – not that I have too many of those . . . though, on second thoughts, perhaps I do have more of them than I think!  
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-06-29 09:30 PM


nice...james
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
4 posted 2015-06-30 01:59 AM


Owl,I have not been here for a while. Great to  open this page and read this delightful poem.

love to you,jo

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2015-06-30 02:00 AM


Owl,I have not been here for a while. Great to  open this page and read this delightful poem.

love to you,jo

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2015-06-30 08:21 PM


Thank you very much indeed, Martyjo.  I hope your reason for being away wasn't that you were ill.  

Love to you too!  

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
7 posted 2015-07-06 12:24 PM


hello owl, you talked about poetry with so much love, or love with so much poetry, words sings here,

have a nice day


yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
8 posted 2015-07-06 02:07 AM


Thank you, James.  Sorry I missed seeing your reply.  
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
9 posted 2015-07-06 02:09 AM


Yann, thank you for your beautiful, poetic and cleverly-put reply!
MICHELMAS
Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305
Lancashire England
10 posted 2015-07-06 10:44 AM


Under whispering tress
In dappled shade
Come sit with me

A pleasure to do so

Michael

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
11 posted 2015-07-06 10:52 AM


Oh, you are most welcome to do so, Michael!  
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
12 posted 2015-07-13 04:53 AM


Sounds wonderful, Diana.
                     Ida

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
13 posted 2015-07-13 01:00 PM


Thank you, Ida, for your kind words.  
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