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devina
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0 posted 2015-06-13 03:42 PM




Thee fools be laughing
nurturing lies,
to break myn' sunshine.

Craving cool despise
double edged blade.
Steely assumption
from erred-name.
Burnt and disabled,
M'heart's stolid stage.

"Fools to the gather"
Truths to be told!
"All lies ye render
spin false in dull gold."

"Ye crumble future,
unwrap solid folds.
Create glassy chaos
shatter soul stones.
Axe to my wounds
It ain't no new goal!
'Twas already wounded
moons long agone woed."

Need no new-marks
wished blend n'mend.
Yet hold only glass starts
a cracked cloud on stars.
"Dark thunder, all ye fools
may it split thee in two."

Love-felt kissed hands
to soul of my tears.
Feed not on green fools
As you Own All my years.

And warm thanks to myn friends
know your names are near.
Nudged in m'heart at fond core,
smiles for all given support-
'n' readin' e'ry Rant-n-pour...      


"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'


[This message has been edited by devina (06-15-2015 08:49 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-06-13 05:20 PM


Usually when fools "be laughing" they are deep into disparaging another hapless soul with out and out lies even they can't recall come next morning.

Eh . . . This has the exact sound of something very personal.
quote:
Feed not on green fools
As you Own All my years.
And yes, dear one, I realize you have many friends who will rally at your side.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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2 posted 2015-06-13 11:33 PM


Well, you certainly gave a good rant here, love.  I try to ignore such goads, but in this case I think the rant is justified.  *Taking mental note to stand clear when you are miffed.  

Michael

devina
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3 posted 2015-06-14 12:32 PM


Jerry- So very kind- you are up tops my friendie-list   ..fer venturing in to read as I rant.
A *point to you on the *personal..hard to tell foe frm friend too often & sadly, these days. Thankful
& keep close, the few I have found. Be well!

Michael- Heartbreaking, to feel the *spite when I never made eye-contact wif it.
Grateful for the steady grounding of you, love..If the good Mother ever sent a grand gift to me..it is *you, all hands down.
luvzu & nuzzles, all-ways.

~T


"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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4 posted 2015-06-16 01:42 AM


hi devina, let fools laugh and keep distant as you can, sometimes friends can help solacing, you used wonderful images and words here,

have a nice day


yann



devina
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5 posted 2015-06-16 02:39 AM


Oh..Yann, dear c'mon back, didn't mean to scare *you (swear)...rofls* & more ha's!

Thank you much fer the read/rant..you have *solid space in my heart m'friend, & means much that you visit

kind thx fer stoppin' in
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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