Open Poetry #49 |
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A sacred germination. |
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whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
The room shivered in ecstasy as its music delved into my soul, And I could see visions within visions, like Salome’s seven veils Drifting away one by one into their ancient tangled mists, Just like convoluted angel’s wings that swished whispers Of woven purple silk around each column of a sun bronzed dawn, And somewhere someone cried pearl tears that dropped to the soil Then rose like a sacred germination into ghostlyswaying orchids, As the sky drifted in purple peace, towards the place called home. A mirror without a reflection is like a picture without any frame, Just a portal of perception that’s forgotten how to silently fade Into shades of insignificance that hold an infinite sense of patience, While the moon danced in whirlygig patterns upon the harbour’s waters As neon lights faded one by one, until at last only street lights remained To illuminate lost and lonely faces hurrying on their clip-clop ways And down on the beach there remained so many liquid memories, While the lapping of the sea made splish-splash noises, like coins Dropping into a wishing well, asthe orchids Once more closed against the night… |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Outstanding verse, poet! This grabbed me at first line and did not wane in poignancy! Each line layers another soft image on the brain.. so enjoyable in its fluidity! take care ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go.." ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
Lapping, each line eclisping. My right eye is sun rise my left is sunset. |
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