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After the Passion |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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after the lovin’ we are so magnificently finished with each other for the time being that we are able to wander into our own isolated sleep no, probably not our dreams will surely connect us I lie there my hands alive remembering the soft places they have been but we are weary we are spent still . . . I remember feeling like God as I inhaled your breath as you lay beneath me may we sleep ‘til noon ©May 27, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-05-2015 07:08 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sweet sighs, Jerry- this is blissful in aftermath! <~~oops! (wordplay) lol. "..we are so magnificently finished with each other for the time being.." ~grinning at your "magnificently" here, nice touch!  love this and here-here's to noon-sleep. take care ~T "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning Tanya, thanks for your special comments . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
wow...just wow, gonna have to leave it at that as anything else I have to say would either be either on the polar cap or the equator |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Sweet talking you, luminosity, and thank you very much for your input about my poem. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful reflection, Jer. Gives me momentary pause to appreciate some of the gifts life grants us. ty Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Michael, good to see you here . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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