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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-05-31 01:22 PM


[at last my keyboard keys are kicking!]

I am stone kicked about on a grassy path,
boots stomping unhurriedly find their mark in me,
the owner seems lost in thought -
but the boots keep kicking me accurately,
I drift as in a dream, if stones can dream.

The last kick has sent me flying
right into some dried-out patch of grass,
purple and gloomy in the pale growing dusk.
The boots have stopped walking,
I feel safe now, assured I won't be kicked again.

Journey's end for the boots is a house
sitting alone in a corner, like me it must feel
anxious that the boots may kick its door,
but house and me, stone, are inanimate -
we don't feel, and life is mere kicking of boots.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-05-31 01:26 PM


If you put this dark poem together thinking of your past, you certainly got a handle on it.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 2015-05-31 01:42 PM


Oh, being kicked by someone who doesn't even notice it is just harsh.  Coming to expect it as a fact of life is just plain dismal.  I only say this because I can relate to them so well...  Deep words here.

Michael

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 2015-06-01 01:46 AM


"..I feel safe now, assured I won't be kicked again.."
~hate to break it to that stone but I have a penchant for.. *relocating.. cute stones and rocks to my garden, so it might still be hunted- just not for kicking. lol.

Great idea to ensconce it away to the house to recoup.
be well  
~d


"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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