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WindWalker12
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0 posted 2015-05-29 01:07 AM


he came into the world
like all do who must come
innocence expecting nothing
(much)(uncertainty)
and they watched carefully
(the soul makers)
this new thing they'd caused
to see if the program took.

he left the home in his time
to see beyond Main Street
he'd been told in school of course
there was nothing beyond
(he didn't believe them)
the dark grew in the alleys
of the earth
when the lights dimmed
(for him)
and when they went out grew darker.  

he walked on for such was his game
something pulling, something pushing
something crying, something laughing
it was a cat (owl) a woman
in a lighted doorway
an infant cried into its silence
and the woman cried into her loss.
(the owl glided on by-nature's ghost
    snatched the hovering soul
    disappeared in the forest forever)
he ran from there.

great waves tossed his spectral frame
black oceans heaving black ships
filled with black men and brown women
(strangers in chains)
chocolate colored children bodies
floated on toothed waves
(feeding bloated sharks)
he came upon a stinking port
anchored in rusty chains to a burning shore
he heard the guns thunder
in the ever night, the always dark
he walked up stony smelly alleys
heard something crying
(inhuman)(harpy)
in a smoky lighted doorway
a child cried soft words muffled
in its mother's torn blouse
he ran from there

haunted by the gun shot
that laid the man in the mud
the woman's scream
(he thought he hadn't heard)
the soldier's curse
(he wished hadn't touched him)
the evil eye of the gun's barrel
in his emaciated face
(he hoped he hadn't seen)
I am the innocent
he mumbled
and fell.

he died no longer innocent
no longer expecting (nothing)
wise and knowing it does not matter
what you think or what you do
for the ever night is the arena
and the rider on the black horse
is the fate master.
(eternity is a curse)
he remembers as he runs
followed in the always dark
by steely galloping hooves
(let there not be another)

but he knows, oh how well he knows
there will always be.

[This message has been edited by WindWalker12 (05-29-2015 02:26 PM).]

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
1 posted 2015-05-29 07:52 AM


Always will there be darkness, but not without some solaced beacon to hold through the night..

This is a great topic and your pen is inspiring.
enjoyed!
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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2 posted 2015-05-29 01:33 PM


a powerful and fine 'penning' (as always !)

                  The Riders

When the moon be shrouded by a hazy veil
and time slows down this midnight hour
the ‘Riders’ come...
dark, silent, on wings of the wind
etching a path through the billowing fog
which swirls and closes in behind ...
on and on seeking the villages of the living...
riding through deserted streets
vaguely phosphorescent in the dim lamplight.

Six will be taken tonight!...

The fleeting shadows flicker, then fade...
The ‘Riders’ are gone!

                 - b. e. adams

jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2015-05-30 09:50 AM


a fine woven tale, enticing me to read all throughtout to the end.."innocence expecting nothing...an infant cried into its silence..." while this soul travels into darkness to find its way.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2015-06-22 09:47 PM


nice writing...james
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