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devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2015-05-24 06:54 PM

High and impaired on wide-eyed songs-
I've boldly licked your wit, in rhyme..
It pebbles my path, one fine jewel at a time-
with rare vernacular of soul sounds, oft spoke.
These fall from your lips, in smooth, finished fit-
for a sip on your sigh cloud, I'd just soak..

I treasure these finds, rouse excitement in mind-
as you discompose my composure, & blush me inside..
to be showered in word-flavor, sharp lasacious behavior-
I am eager with the contingency, vocalized so well,
'n justify flutters, while awaiting your next drip of favor..
On verbal plume of crystal-cloud, you have me on melt...

Even in dark mule-moods, your rare-flare will find a way-
to force my fore-thoughts speeding, to depletion of reason,
And I bathe on warm flounder- in soft-beg...for a taste.

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'
[This message has been edited by devina (05-24-2015 07:30 PM).]

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2015-05-24 07:15 PM

quote:
I've boldly licked your wit, in rhyme..

You understand the power of word like few do, Tanya. Indeed, you boldly go where few or none have gone before in your writing. Lavishly beautiful pour here. "flounder in soft beg"... oh my!

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-05-24 08:22 PM

Michael said it for me.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2015-05-25 10:40 AM

ME TOO!!

j.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2015-05-25 01:13 PM

hi devina, it is breathtaking, and the words glitter like nothing else,

yann

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2015-05-25 08:25 PM

Michael- as boldly as you enunciate, yes..? *the look (just cause)..

Jerry & J- thanks for the second and third, I appreciate the stop-in!

Yann- Aww thanks sweetie, your read always means much! I really had fun with this one.

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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