I had a car (extrait de voyage)

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2015-05-23 10:47 AM

I had a car
in Kentucky,
The car is the best friend of man,
I had a car
to cross Lexington,
To eat hot dog,
I was in a country in the hard skin,
With the rough eyes,
I had a car
To visit caves,
To count motels
And understand the world,
I accelerated, I slowed down,
I pretended to love
Girls, girls, girls,
Jennifer Lawrence played the banjo
dans la nuit américaine
I listened to the sweet coffee
Predict me the future,
I went a car
And I avoided my devils,
I fled my psychiatrists,
I had a car
in Kentucky
A turquoise blue car,
Long as a girl,
Beautiful as an actress,
I wrote poems in the steering wheel,
I wrote poems without knowing it,
Poems without knowing you.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2015-05-23 11:27 AM

I really like this. Something I want to do in life just once... driving cross country, seeing the sights with no absolute destination or deadline that *has to be met. enjoyed the trip.

Michael

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2015-05-23 03:10 PM

thank a lot michael, i hope you will accomplish , america is the best country for that kind of trip, and there are many places to discover and enjoy

have a nice day

yann

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2015-05-23 09:17 PM

Oh my Yann...this is LOVELY!!

Enjoyed the carefree wind in this one!

"I listened to the sweet coffee
Predict me the future.."
~this gave me grins

"..A turquoise blue car,
Long as a girl,
Beautiful as an actress.."
~high word flavor..lovitt!

be well
~T

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2015-05-25 01:15 PM

oh devina, it is so cute and exquisite, o read your comment twice,

thanks

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2015-05-26 11:11 PM

Reminded me of an old song I heard in France that started out and I'm not good at spelling French Je Nai sai paw, avec im wah and ended with bang, bang ,bang American, le folklore American "you gotta quit kicking my dog around"... or something close...james

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2015-05-28 12:29 PM

thanks james, I don't know the song, may be you could write the other side of the Mirror,
i am pleased of your comment
yann

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