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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2015-05-23 08:26 AM


The plight of so many of the homeless in this once Great Country.(/i>


we see them everywhere in the cities
sitting on benches
sprawled in alleyways
their broken, destroyed lives
desires and dreams washed away
what is left of their spirit
hollowed out until nothing is there
thought process assaulted and corrupted
taken to levels of profound despair
that no one should ever have to sink into
their one remaining sentiment
bitterness
the social order has trod upon
and destroyed their sense of humanity
so they sit and lie
upon benches and alleyways
in despair
without hope
forever damaged

©May 21, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-23-2015 09:23 AM).]

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Michael
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1 posted 2015-05-23 11:30 AM


Indeed, Jer... and we seem to see it more and more today, growing numb to it as a society.  Truly sad.

Michael

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-05-23 11:36 AM


You are so right, Michael. What makes it even worse, is that many veterans have been discarded by our government and have no other place to go. Even worse, many of these veterans have mental and/or physical conditions brought on from their service to their country. A country which treats them like garbage. Appreciate your thought on this problem.

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devina
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3 posted 2015-05-23 09:02 PM


You have captured the somber mood of this topic very well, Jerry!

be well
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-05-23 09:10 PM


Thank you, devina  . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jjote
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5 posted 2015-05-24 02:40 PM


very sad to remember on "memorial day"...now who does the remembering on this holiday, the veterans who are left behind, or the loved ones they left behind. Or are they ever remember...mostly all are in a holiday spirit
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-05-24 02:48 PM


Your thoughts and words capture my poem completely, jjote, and I thank you for them.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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