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Open Poetry #49

To whom it may concern 2

Digitalscissors
New Member
Posts 7

0 posted 2015-05-14 03:56 PM

Soft whispers, tears and laughter
a soft caress, your voice
like velvet to the soul
Almond eyes, dark yet bright
and curls I love to touch
sweet happiness and joy
the first time was when
we met in Amsterdam
and again
when our baby boy, Rayan was born
I can never forget you
no matter how hard I might try
Love is stronger, they say
Hopeful that it is
Even if time could slow down
I embrace eternity with you

My letters may get jumbled
even if the words won't come out
remember how much I love you
you, just you, can understand
eternity without you is hell and
madness my friend...

I love you

[This message has been edited by Digitalscissors (05-14-2015 04:28 PM).]

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2015-05-14 04:03 PM

This is a most-telling thought, warm to read between the strains:

"...Even if time could slow down
I embrace eternity with you..."

~d

"...But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go...
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2015-05-14 09:45 PM

I can feel the heartbreak in this! Amazing writing...

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-05-15 10:04 PM

nice writing...james

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