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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Rain pours down- to feed a soul, too hungry to survive. If not nudged- I'd- simply put, flutter and subside. Memory caves on crumble- I scramble from deflect's defeat, Time's sweet decent- still comes apart inside a dark-bird bleat. Testing me in kisses- of salty replete. Tip me back- and take me back, to nights of sunset-breeze. When eyes scorched longest after, and dreams still marked me whole- When smiles were made audible, to matter- And I had not become bled-bold. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (05-14-2015 12:37 AM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is very emotionnal, between rain and smiles, a high place of poetry,(i didn't get all nuances alas beacause of subtlety of images in english)) thanks a lot yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Bled-bold." This title and references within the poem give the reader an array of possibilities. Enjoyed the path you took withing th4 lines of this poem, Devina. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yann- S'ok...I slay the English language with as much consistency as possible  ty much!Jerry-possibility keeps me writing for sure! ty for the read! ~d "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"It rained here this morning... but I still saw a beautiful crescent moon on the horizon before the clouds settled in. I suppose it was all rather appropriate. Felt your melancholy all the way down here. Wish I could make you smile from here. Throwin' ((hugs)) your way so I fully expect to be pounced soon." Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (05-14-2015 08:19 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Michael- We must have shared the same rain, light though it was. And? Expectation *granted...  You now have inexhaustible pouncing privileges, sweet man... ~T "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go... ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' |
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