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That Kiss
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That Kiss |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Take my hand and hide with me- in the wet-stains after dark... Rain will wrap us safe and long- to chase lightning bugs, a'spark... Shadows drip need-rainbow heat, Infusing shades of brown on green- and crushing velvet-red of heart... We are target to that cusp of flame- Fall weak in tongues of sweetest press, and hands in hair, hot body mesh... I want to need, so close to pain- Our teardrops kiss 'neath spatter-rain, Licking quick those mixed in wane, heartbeats strong, pulse vein on vein... Eyes locked now, you feel my shift- I see that you *just know*... Your palms on hip-tilt forward- Our lips...they never ever slow. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow! Steamy like rain on a hot sidewalk! Gave me the feeling I shouldn't be watching what I was reading. oolala! Makes me want to go put a lip lock on the old man! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sweet, almost lewd (better than sweet) lines in this poem made to titillate even the stingiest person. I know where my mindset is at the moment. Hot! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Whew! It's getting warm in here. Third stanza is priceless. The subtle intermingling of pain with the other images presented here set it apart. I like this side of you. Michael |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Devina,If I say too much I will give my inner self away.Excellent writing. Jo [This message has been edited by latearrival (05-10-2015 02:40 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*just makin' toast o'er here people  LOL. I mean really...it's just a kiss...well not "just"...and also deeply...but still a kiss. Serious Thank You's for joining me, Lori, Jerry, Michael and Jo...you are all adding to the heat a'purpose!  be well ~d Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Ohhhhhhhhhh Myyyyyy!!!! Have a nice day!  Jaime |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Whew!!! Someone needs to crank up the AC! LOL Fanning... and enjoying!!! LOL |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
just a fascinatiing imagery, like in a dream connection, evry word is perfect yann |
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AmyMichelle Junior Member Posts 21 Charlotte, NC |
Devina, Wow! Excellent! I especially loved "Shadows drip need-rainbow heat, Infusing shades of brown on green- and crushing velvet-red of heart..." True love always waits. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
My warmest thanks for joining the drizzle! Be well, all you's ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Let's go hide!!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
rofl...Mike..sweet still, is the deer from spring to summer! Missed your name around here mister, we shall not hide- but dance in the fields huggs fer gracing my page, ty ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
... sighs ... With so many already ahead of me in line I really have no hope of ever ... So I'll wait patiently at the very end of the line and maybe, just maybey ... but I can read and reread and reread ... What a wonderfully gentle fantasy to think about and fall asleep to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big, feel-good hugs, DV, and have a so good night. Dadygoose |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
well, well, well, and another well just for good measure enjoyed Michael |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Jaime and Michelmas.. Much thanks for popping in to read! take care m'friends ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go.." ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' |
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