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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2015-04-25 12:20 PM

          Your True Heart

Beyond the angry world of day
where men are still cutting down
  rainbows,
when the fine-enamel moon
hangs like a multi-orbed taper
flaming in the gathering mist
that seems to condense reality
into a prisoner of the endless dark-
immense silence of the night,
it is only then that I still believe
the sky may be truly listening  to
my dreams of Love’s perfection
as they fly to pace the night wind
along all the pathways of eternity
to your one true heart.

                --- b. e. adams (4/25/2015)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-04-25 09:26 AM

his, in my thoughts ranks right up there as one of your best poems . . . Truly impressive . . . The words just seemed to meld together to form a priceless poem of love . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2015-04-25 08:20 PM

thanks, JP !!

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2015-04-26 06:20 AM

simply EPIC penning here! you drop these words softly, like pebbles in warm sand.

take care
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2015-04-26 11:10 AM

Thank you !

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2015-04-26 12:16 PM

Another fine poem from you, Bruce.
ida

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2015-04-26 03:12 PM

as always, thank you so much, Ms. Ida!

One of my (many) "critics" said that I only write "pseudo-sentimental, syrup-dipped tripe!" ...
but, perhaps this ever lovely but sad 'ol world could use more of it (and more "incurable
Romantics?!") ... triping on, Bruce

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2015-04-27 08:32 PM

nice...james

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2015-04-27 09:46 PM

Thanks JM !

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