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Devilish Angel
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Devilish Angel |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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your face bears an angelic look it is your smile that slightly impious smile which gives you your devilish bearing that smile, that beguiling smile warm and altogether pixyish still, it whispers of midnight fantasies and daylight delights oh yes, it is the mouth, the smile giving the impression of dark, sensuous pleasures and fleshly longings as the halo hoverin' o'er your head looks down lustily and slightly tilted even angels can be enticed ©April 1, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I think April Fool's Day is a good day for this poem! You take us in with the image of an innocent angel and then give us a surprise! Well done my friend! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori for your thoughts concerning my poem. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really like this one. -Juju |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Juju, I appreciate that you read and commented on my poem . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah . . . all the above, at least from Lori and Juju...lol. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Thank you Jimmy . . . Appreciate you chiming in. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
lol I try to read everyone's stuff here and if I can I reply. Please don't take any offense. It doesn't mean anything if I don't comment. Usually I read on my Iphone when I am waiting on someone and it is a pain to write on it. (: Hence my simple comments. Please forgive. Juju |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nothing to forgive, Juju, nothing at all. I am just grateful when you can. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight this is! Sometimes those halos need a little tarnish! LOL |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh yes indeed, southern, halos without that little bit of tarnish becomes boring, so very boring. Thank you. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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