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The Black Box
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The Black Box |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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when we finally came together after I understood and defeated my demons her voice sounded relieved at last after all this time you have found the black box and it showed you the reason which made things crash and burn you have destroyed them I said yes through you I have discovered in my old age a new way of looking at things and through you every glance at the world around you will be a sort of salvation ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-30-2015 12:34 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I like your perspective in this one. Good job. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori, it was heartfelt . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
kind of brings a closure and yes, a new perspective |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Rex, I appreciate your kind words. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Great analogy here, Jerry. Well done. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much Ida, ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
written with wisdom, experience and affection real nice |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks Emma, for your nice thoughts. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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