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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2015-03-19 04:48 PM

Rain on the appletree
a kaleidoscope of sky etchings
caterpillar calypso where deep purple
dresses the once storm ravaged branches

it's a world wide of linguistics
double dutch rhymes that
run on run on
chitter chatter in the parlor
peekaboo cumulous
and a cauldron of parables
when heart and mind collide
in overtime

the no sleep nocturnal
now morphs into the incoherent
of morning riddles
where the celebral has been siphoned

I am putty in your presence
a wonder whirl of words
sleepless and scattered

all by you
my beautiful blue eyed stranger

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (03-19-2015 05:42 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-03-19 06:19 PM

Whoa!!!!! Did you ever have your stuff all together with this wild piece of poetry, Emma. And then I find out it was all because of a blue eyed stranger. Loved your new photo, looking sharp there . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2015-03-19 06:44 PM

I like the way you use language in this one. Quite effective.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2015-03-20 07:11 PM

Ahhhh.. to only have blue eyes for one day..

this reminds of trees and innocence, afternoons and wonder

beautiful picture Emmy Lou..

this made my afternoon

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2015-03-20 09:22 PM

Certainly glad I have blue eyes - and dreams!
As usual with yours, my friend, enjoyed, and agree with Jerry.

Oh, and loved the new picture!

j.

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2015-03-20 11:14 PM

"I am putty in your presence
a wonder whirl of words
sleepless and scattered

all by you
my beautiful blue eyed stranger"

My favorite lines above..so is the blue eyed stranger the reason for the lovely new photo?

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2015-03-21 07:15 AM

Oh my, MS Emma! you have raised interest and eyebrows with your blue eyed stranger! Love your new pic too. As always, I love, love your images as they curl and swirl my imagination like smoke. ~L

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2015-04-15 09:10 PM

enjoyed...james

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

8 posted 2015-04-16 01:18 PM

Enjoyed this very much!
your words evoke a myriad play of remembers from me
take care!
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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