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Open Poetry #49

Wind In Bamboo Leaves

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-02-04 09:52 PM

Wind In Bamboo Leaves

The wind in the bamboo leaves
is so loud that I can barely
hear two hearts beating,
so loud I can barely
hear two people speaking,
still I know precisely
the distance that love extends
because I am here with my sweetheart
face to face and skin to skin
enveloped in our closeness
as the caressing of
two hearts begins.

JamesLee
03February
2014

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-02-04 10:14 PM

James are you suggesting that this is a "whirlwind" romance?

Lori

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2014-02-05 01:57 AM

so impressive and very evocative of romance, I adore

thanks

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-02-05 07:54 AM

That's funny Lori.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2014-02-05 05:24 PM

Much enjoyed the sensual seduction that your poem suggests.
Gotta love it!!!!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2014-02-06 07:14 PM

Very nice!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2014-02-09 05:10 PM

... and there comes a moment when the heartbeats will be the only tune you can be aware of

despite the strong wind in bamboo leaves.

Delightful, dear James!

Margherita

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