Open Poetry #49 |
Immortal Star |
Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Immortal Star In the twinkling twilight glitter that reflected off your car were my glints from ‘cross a billion miles of far off distant stars. Your learned say we stars have died and yet our light still keeps to race across the realms of galaxies light-years love to leap. When we exploded blasting forth all elements in our light, it fed the newborn stars in stellar cribs who nursed thru night. Our gold and silver, nickel and copper, mercury, carbon and zinc did grow an Earth which grew a man who’s now our future link. Most million years we lived and laughed to dance galactic Space as orbs of light which in your eyes were blinks of spectral grace and as we dim and are no more our light stays pure and just when in the mirror you reflect an image made of us. From death came life, a natural law that governs even stars who sent light ‘cross a billion miles to land upon your car and tell you true that you are Man, a legacy made of we who waited for you to carry within our immortality. Namyh |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . The puzzling of the origin and complexity of us and how we managed to find our way to where we are today. You write intelligently and the rhyming is excellent . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
JerryP – When you stop to consider that we are the distant dust of stars dead a billion years and more, it lets you know that in the beginning blink of some geologic eye we just got here less than a second ago which no doubt accounts for those human retardations we have yet to overcome. Whoa! How’s that for a mind boggler of poetic puzzling complexity. Always good to hear from the one and only JerryP. So glad you enjoyed the rhyming too. Namyh |
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