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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Full moon salmon pink Setting in the western sky Mirrors the sunrise. LGR©3/5/15 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So pretty Lori... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cold and rainy here I don’t like the cold and rain when its inside me ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Everything a haiku should be. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I once witnessed a setting moon catching the glow of a hazy sunrise in such a grand way that it appeared to me that there were two suns in the sky. That was a very peculiar feeling... was sure that I was dreaming. Great write. Michael |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this... j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey! Look at all these friends! Thank you so much! I feel like I should break out a bottle of wine. I'm so glad my little Haiku touched a spot with each of you. ~L |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
Beautiful! A wonderful visual! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I just got back from checking on Nancy Coleman. The small headstone was unreadable except for her name and the year she died which was 1775, The elements obliterated everything else. Sorry, but that is all I know. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I wondered if that stone had been moved from it's original resting place. The Louisiana Purchase was in the 1800's. The name Nancy that long ago was still a nickname for Nan or Ann or Annis, so it could be the stone of a child. There should be a plot map that could possibly tell you more. But all the facts might take all the fun out of the mystery. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And I have constructed a few more poems about Nancy. After I found that grave marker my imagination went wild. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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J.J.thomas Member Posts 84 |
short sweet and to the point, I like it. |
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