Open Poetry #49 |
Where is Spring? |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Where is Spring? Grey clouds frozen to the mountain tops are tipped in frosted Winter moonlight above this dazzling ice-crystal forest. From somewhere very, very far away the tremulous sound of distant evening bells rides the raw-cold twilight wind as ten thousand tree-shadows dance its plaintiff tune. On a night such as this, does Spring live best in a grand memory, a fine hope, or a lovely dream? --- b. e. adams (2/5/2015) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful.I went out to look at the moon last night but as I looked over the opposite way I saw the dark shadow of my very huge Magnolia tree.It looked beautiful so tall and wide and shaped perfectly. Dark against the light cloud covered sky. Wish you could have seen it.You would have put some nice words to the scene. best to you.Jo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
The scene you describe would indeed likely generate some lovely cascading imagery! I've simply tried to give fine 'voice' to Nature throughout the ever-changing pageant of seasons down the rolling years |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks James !! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
beautiful ~ Your spring is just around the corner, we will be coming into Autumn soon enough her is Oz. Love is the life of the soul... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Autumn is actually my most favorite season. Thank you for your comment/reply posting on this 'write!' |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Spring is here, Bruce, but I'm sure your can lure it back with your words. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks, Ida! |
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