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MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

0 posted 2015-01-18 09:42 AM

~nature's miracle~

liquid droplets formed
into masses of storm clouds
snow serenely fell

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-01-18 10:13 AM

Love Haikus! Love snow! Love your combo!
Welcome to the blue buffet! Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-01-18 10:48 AM

Love the snow, lived through many a snowstorm in New York and Cheyenne. I left the frigid cold. I love snow, but these days it is through pictures and videos in the comfort of southern Louisiana mild winters.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2015-01-18 12:42 PM

Hello MissMarti, welcome to Passions in Poetry!

Your haiku is very lovely. I enjoy this form of poetry very much.

Looking forward to your further offerings.

Margherita

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2015-01-19 12:04 PM

Loved your poem. Welcome to PIP.
Hugs, Ethel

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2015-01-19 12:29 PM

lovely haiku, indeed with happy sensitivity, thanks

yann

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2015-01-21 03:36 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Message!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2015-01-24 07:04 PM

nice...james

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

8 posted 2015-01-24 07:10 PM

From droplets of water to soft , serene snowflakes. Beautifully delivered images, in just 17 syllables.

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

9 posted 2015-01-24 07:13 PM

From droplets of water to soft , serene snowflakes. Beautifully delivered images, in just 17 syllables.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

10 posted 2015-01-24 07:27 PM

a most pleasant 'write!'

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

11 posted 2015-01-24 10:01 PM

Snow is a miracle. I feel this piece is aptly titled. Welcome to Passions.

Michael

MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

12 posted 2015-01-25 05:48 AM

A great Big Thank you to all who wrote comments and welcomed me. I am trying to get back to writing poetry as I took a hiatus for a while. All of you are amazing writers!

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

13 posted 2015-02-01 06:27 AM

sweet haiku - well done!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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